Title: Rude Preschool Person
Author: Mary Ellen -- mecurtin @ alumni.princeton.edu
Rating: PG
Codes: K/S; Rude Person; humor [Farf's note: "Rude Person" was an ASCEM fad several years ago where people told the same K/S story, a shuttlecraft crash/cave/pon farr classic plot, in different dialects such as Scottish, Minnesotan, and even Jamaican patois. Here is, in my humble opinion, the cutest one. And it sort of breaks the no-privates rule, but in a very excusable way. *giggle*]
Summary: A three-and-a-half year old Kirk fan tells all.

I *swear* I was trying to review math books, and this came out. I don't even know if it's funny. Thanks to my husband and to Wildcat for a couple of vocabulary suggestions.

I think Viacom should share their toys. I have to share toys even when I don't want to. Sides I promise I won't break anything and I'll put Pock back when I'm done. Captain Kirk can sleep in my room in the crib from when I was just a baby.

Rude Preschool Person

by Mary Ellen Curtin


Captain Kirk and Mister Pock were in a kind of airplane and they went to a planet. Earth is a planet but we can't see the whole thing. Mommy shows me the planet Venus and the planet Jupiter sometimes at night, but I don't like the dark cause there's owls.

Captain Kirk's airplane broke so they had to run away. It was raining and thundering, too, so they wanted to hide. Captain Kirk isn't scared of thunder like I am. Maybe it was Pock who was scared. He doesn't smile much so I like Captain Kirk better. I like him in the green shirt the most. I think Captain Kirk was wearing his green shirt this time.

Captain Kirk found a cave they could hide in, like when my big sister and I hide under the blankets. Pock wasn't scared of the thunder when he was in the cave with Captain Kirk and his flashlight.

Pock got sick. He had a tummyache and a headache and everything. The doctor wasn't there to make him better, and the nurse wasn't there either. The nurse likes Pock a lot but she's kind of silly and she doesn't wear any pants. Barbie wasn't there either but she really likes the Captain better. I like her hair but Mommy can't fix my Barbie's hair that way, it's too tricky.

So Pock asked the Captain to take care of him cause he's sick. He calls the Captain "Jim" cause they're friends. And he wanted the Captain to smooch him, and a bunch of grownup stuff. When I'm sick I get a nest on the sofa and I watch movies and Mommy reads to me all day. The Captain had to think about it and walk around and wave his arms and talk loud. Use-ally the Captain smooches women so he didn't want to smooch Pock. Hugging is OK.

Then Captain Kirk smiled at me! I like it best when he smiles. So Pock smiled a teeny bit too and they smooched. Smooching is grownup kissing and it looks funny. I laughed. Then they hugged and stuff and then they wanted to run around naked. Since they're grownups they never have to wear dipes even at night. Captain Kirk doesn't wear unders in the daytime, just his black pants. They're both men so they have a wiener. Daddy has one too. All men and boys have wieners for their privates and so they can stand up to go potty. I think they're funny-looking and they wiggle.

So then Pock felt all better. Captain Kirk and Mister Pock were happy and they put their pants back on. Then the Starship Enterprise came back with the Doctor and Sulu and Hurra. The Doctor is cranky a lot and likes to drink grownup drinks which I think are yucky. He found Captain Kirk and Pock being happy and he got *really* cranky at Pock. I think Captain Kirk will give him time out.

That's the end.


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